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This short story has an extremely great use of imagery. Your use of words paint a very vivid image for the reader. Your style of writin...

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This short story has an extremely great use of imagery. Your use of words paint a very vivid image for the reader. Your style of writing is fantastic as well. This story is very well written. I would even go as far as to say you are as skilled with words as the professionals. This piece had great emotionally impact. And was all in all a very powerful piece. I honestly have nothing negative to say about this. I could see it as though it were a film playing out due to how excellent the imagery was. I think your two strongest skills here are imagery and ability to convey all levels of emotions. It makes the reader get a sense of empathy. I could feel the pain, the sorrow despite never having gone through these things myself. Bravo OOmi! Hands down, the best short story I have read in years.
Going in on Tuesday the 15th to complete my tattoo. All that is left is to colour in the lacing. I was going to make the lacing red to match the bow but lots of people say I should do the lacing black to contrast the bow. Some friends even sugest a gradient with the bottom laces being black the middle ones being grey then the top ones being red. And two people suggested one leg have red lacing and the other leg have black lacing like Harley Quinn style. I am so torn on what to do!T_T I may make a poll and take votes.lol
  • Listening to: Vikings Intro
  • Reading: Comments on DA ^_^
  • Watching: Vikings
  • Playing: Nadda!
  • Eating: Strawberry Pocky
  • Drinking: Chamomile Tea in a fancy tea cup out of a matching

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Jennifer
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United States
I am Jenni or Jennifear. I am older than I look, by a lot.lol I have a 3 year old daughter and I live in the middle of nowhere in CT. Yes, I am taken. Luckily my dearest is awesome and lets me do any kind of modeling I want.^_^
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StarDragon77 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2016
Thanks for adding me to your friends/watch list. 
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JenniFeary Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. Glad to see you are still deviating and such.:)
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StarDragon77 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2016
I'm doing more on Tumblr than here, actually.
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JenniFeary Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I need your Tumblr link please.^_^
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Mekari Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2016
Thank you very much for the fave!
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JenniFeary Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem. Your artwork is wonderful!^_^
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Mekari Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2016
Thank you very much!
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JenniFeary Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
You are very welcome. Keep up the great work.:)
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HoorayForSeymour Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for the favs :)
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JenniFeary Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem.^_^
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